Saturday, December 16, 2017

Sun, Don't You Shine! ! …[ Written On A Sunny Day; Very Short; ½ True; Humor? ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Wear your Sun Block! ', my wife did whine.
Instead, ….. I ORDERED the Sun …..not to shine,
whereupon the yellow orb quickly hid …………
behind a massive cloud.
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Bri Edwards
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Loke Kok Yee 06 January 2018

I am not sure if the sun did hide Or you’re taking us all for a ride Thanks Bri

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Mj Lemon 17 December 2017

It hid? It really did? Bri, you must not have been...in Madrid (no clouds) . Well done....humour and a quick, perfect delivery.

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Valsa George 17 December 2017

Now I understand that you are a Superman who has control over all elements and even the stars and constellations! Simple and sweet!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 December 2017

A funny write of delight.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 December 2017

You are brilliant and your this poem is very brilliant. Interesting humor is expressed in this amazing poem. Cloud covers the sun and we do not see sunshine. But certainly sun rays fall on skin at morning helps skin in preparing vitamin D. Wonderful thoughtful poem is shared...10

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