Sunday, October 5, 2014

Sun Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Powder blue

The day opens
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Susan Lacovara
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Daniel Brick 09 October 2014

Your SUN DAY is not a day of rest unless you consider so much excitement, movement, interaction restful. No, your special day is a day that is active, super-active. You put yourself in carnival atmosphere but it's really a stage for YOU, a performance the poem records. I think the spirit of this day you call yours is displayed by the way the poem doesn't have an ending - no destination is reached, the carnival doesn't shut down, no one shows up and cries, Susan, it's over now! Come home.The poem just stops, but the spirit it celebrates is on-going..Because that spirit is in you.

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Anthony Burkett 05 October 2014

I can see you smile... :)

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 05 October 2014

Powder blue that day opens, beautifully penned the poem.

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Chuy Amante 05 October 2014

That was visually tasty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A+

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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