Thursday, June 13, 2013

Sun- -Cinquain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun
Gives light
It shines dazzlingly
And provides us heat
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chandra thiagarajan
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f enel chat 23 October 2020

It is a bad app

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Joe mama 27 February 2020

Good one. Me like it very much.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 June 2013

The divine providence lovely one

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

a nice cinquain. short, sweet and to the point.

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Kavya . 17 June 2013

powerful as the bright sun!

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R.j. Wynn 16 June 2013

Awesome write, well done, check out Stardust and thanks.

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Shahzia Batool 16 June 2013

this is the positive side of looking at this phenomenon! a fine read! ! !

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David Wood 15 June 2013

Brilliant like the sun.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 June 2013

the sun is brilliant..Nice to read..

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Dave Walker 14 June 2013

Short and sweet, a great poem.

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Neela Nath Das 13 June 2013

Short but profound.Wonderful indeed.

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Neela Nath Das 13 June 2013

Short but profound, Ma'am.Beautiful.

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