Thursday, July 19, 2012
Sun Child Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Upon a time it happened once;
and once upon a time:
A story during which you'll sense,
Betrayal as a crime.
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Saadat Tahir
22 July 2012
very nice with a classical abab rhyme scheme... reminds one of the children of Rio.....or Manila....i guess a global phenomenon now more or less. liked reading yer lines cheers :)
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7/24/2025 10:43:59 PM # 1.0.0
it reminds me of Coldplay band song paradise, well composed :)