Thursday, July 19, 2012

Sun Child Comments

Rating: 4.5

Upon a time it happened once;
and once upon a time:
A story during which you'll sense,
Betrayal as a crime.
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Slevin Kelevra
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Shireen Ramadan 05 September 2012

it reminds me of Coldplay band song paradise, well composed :)

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Saadat Tahir 22 July 2012

very nice with a classical abab rhyme scheme... reminds one of the children of Rio.....or Manila....i guess a global phenomenon now more or less. liked reading yer lines cheers :)

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