Sun Chases The Moon! Comments

sun can not meet his beloved moon, beautiful expressions, you have presented your theme very nicely in the poem, thanks for sharing,

Alas! The sun is fated not to meet the moon! Everyday the sun becomes hopeful, As Sisyphus is punished to do one thing over and over! / The subject has been taken from a folklore and has been converted into poem beautifully. Here, the reference to Greek mythology adds grace to it. Thanks for sharing.