Sun Burnt Me..... Comments

interesting poem, but I like it

O thou saddest day! I wonder why the Sun Burned me..... Gloomed and doomed my life Sun scorched me Left its deadly marks on me Aimed its rays to destroy me Is this my life fate? its really a well written poem with innovative way of expression.. the best is your idea and expression and the way you wrote is very much poetic and soul feeling..lovely poem...10/10 ++++++++

Tragically beautiful.........How the story goes, in a rythmical pattern, going along of how the burnt thee.! 10 awesomeness

Hi Dulakshi: Enjoyed reading this poem thoroughly. A simple theme has been handled so well by you. Amazing! Keep on writing.

BEAUTIFUL POEM LIFE IS SUM TIMES PAINFUL WELL WRITTEN MY FRIEND

Hi Dulakshi Beautiful poem... unique in its sense.... Sun would kiss you and bless you I enjoyed Thank you 10+

You have used a common situation to write a unique poem. Well done my freind.

Left its deadly marks on me Aimed its rays to destroy me Is this my life fate? ' really it made me go in deep thought..... yes every one wanna knw fate of life....words reflects a deep pain' regards

just like the sun, you shine because of your passion in poetry. See how powerful it can be when you, who is passionate enough to make such lovely poems frees your emotions? nice one. God bless!

hey dulakshi..... i liked the way u presented the sun...... v.gud keep it up

very well written. you've used metaphors which i like in the poems. to see the sun as fire....well done. keep it up

Like your poem...'sun Burnt Me' the metaphor of being burnt by the sun can be scorching. good write a 10

another awesome write! !

The 'Sun' is blameless, life would not exist on Earth without it. Such as 'fire' warns to not touch, so your foolishness to expose your self unprotected to it is worded to blame its beneficiial power. You offer no profile as to age or self interests, etc. Your Immaturity does reflect and having given some thought and time, you will will have more self insight of the world and life in general

good poem, well done i like it

Nice poem with good talent of you Dulakshi, but you very fateful look, 'it is my life fate? '

wowwwwwwwww a lovely poem good imagery and wonderful metaphors on the whole-an enjoyable write -10 anjali

wowwwwwwwww a lovely poem good imagery and wonderful metaphors on the whole-an enjoyable write -10 anjali

Interesting poem...is making me wonder what the sun is a metaphor for? I like it very much.

Some beautiful and thoughtful comments here, Dulakshi, seeker of comments. The sun has no burning sun when we use shade or an umbrella, or on a cloudy day, or at dawn or dusk. *Choose well your time*. Look it up! ! !