Sun Below The Cedarwood Comments

Solid imagework, makes this piece come alive for the readers ingest..Ever experiment w/ couplet stazaing? ...this piece might look creatively & graphically better groomed, with this structure(just an idea that a good poet lent to me awhile back, & that has worked well for me when appropriate) A JOB WELL DONE, SEBASTIAN.....'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F. j. R.}