From the womb of the night
Comes out a sun, glowing bright
The sky is his cradle,
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Deep and passionately crafted is this beautiful poem of yours. Your diction is a complete delight.
A wonderful and unique love poem. It captures the eternality of love. Well executed write.
It's a lovely poem Bipasa! My favorite lines: Sun and moon in their own galaxy of love/Teaching us truth of life from high above....Your are writing extremely well. I admire the way you have streamlined things through a systematic flow and use of suitable rhyming words! We would love to see more such poems in days ahead! bless you
Yes true love is unconstitutional, timeless and eternal. A sweet poem. Top score.