Tuesday, February 13, 2018

Sun And Moon - A Celestial Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the womb of the night
Comes out a sun, glowing bright

The sky is his cradle,
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Bipasha Dutt
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 June 2022

Yes true love is unconstitutional, timeless and eternal. A sweet poem. Top score.

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Chinedu Dike 23 August 2020

Deep and passionately crafted is this beautiful poem of yours. Your diction is a complete delight.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 February 2018

A wonderful and unique love poem. It captures the eternality of love. Well executed write.

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Bipasha D 21 February 2018

Thank you so much for your kind words

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 February 2018

It's a lovely poem Bipasa! My favorite lines: Sun and moon in their own galaxy of love/Teaching us truth of life from high above....Your are writing extremely well. I admire the way you have streamlined things through a systematic flow and use of suitable rhyming words! We would love to see more such poems in days ahead! bless you

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Bipasha D 14 February 2018

Thanks a lot for such kind words

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