Sun And Moon Comments

Lovell poem Another poem on moon to play in schools

Excellent poem, they are inseparable.

your first stanza is great. this is very beautiful. good job. *Purkey Girl*

this is such a beautiful poem.ilike the imegery you have woven in the poem10+ MAMTA

Great write, William... I like the human qualities contained within. Superbly done! ! Brian

This is a poem of true beauty William.--Melvina--

wow, this is a lovely poem. Great job. : ]

magnificent assignments and a marvelously beautiful work...it moves like the heavenly bodies move gracefully and continuously. excellent work. -Tailor

Wow...This is kind of eery...in fact kind of spooky...lovely poem Hugs, Dee

Lovely William, truly a love story Patricia

flawless and quite lovely

William...I understand of every word....these words touch my soul. Thank you~!

I like that the moon is the male and the sun the female. And the reflected light in the last stanza - shivery!

The blue side of the moon, lone midnight reflections searching for the warm cresent of your smile..... Lovely, however sad...thanks, William. Sandra

Fantastic William! These lovers do they quarrel like us? Who knows......? we don't hear their disputes.

Wow! what powerful emotion in this, you have the poets gift of holding the readers eye as well as there heart in safe hands,10 from me, Love Duncan