Wednesday, September 2, 2015

Sun And Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun you are reality and Moon you are dream
You burn my skin and you soothe my soul
You tauten days and you lighten nights
I see worries and In you I find solace
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 07 December 2016

A brilliant comparison, Asimji 10

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Salman Sayeed 18 April 2016

Comparative between sun and moon its vary beautiful Thanks for aharing

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 November 2015

A worth reading comparison..Man

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 02 September 2015

A comparative poem, A good distinction between the sun and moon, I invite you to read my poem Voice Of An Unaccomplished Soul (on poet's Page)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2015

A captivating comparision among sun and moon. So nicely drafted and aptly presented. Many thanks dear Nehal, may God increase your poetic thoughts.........10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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