Thursday, October 8, 2009

Sun And Moon Comments

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There is a sun and moon for every star in this sky,
Births of stars followed by deaths, comfort us faintly.
The stars in the atmosphere carry affection as they flash and blink,
Much like us in a way all.
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Naveed Akram
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Seema Chowdhury 08 October 2009

very good composition but it reflects painful words and feelings. remember life has both ups and dows and surely with pain will come joy too. pl see some of my new poems Dwell in my soul pg1 Watch the magic happen pg3

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Naveed Akram

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