Crystallized light
Perfecting on distant surfaces
As two lay promises and entwined
Glittering darkness with dusty bright
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A charming and enchanting collaboration. Exceptional work!
A wonderful collaborative work with Sun Princess- Sun, earth, moon we three / Friend we always be.- Captivating lines !
Great poem, great talent. Powerful and eternal. Now bring Sunprincess back from where she has gone.
Great poem, great talent. Powerful and eternal. Now bring Sunprincess back from where she has gone.
Soul and Rachel, a beautiful poem marked with your special stamp - a great collaborative effort.
This is so rare and beautiful. i remember lots of things by reading this work. Well done soul and Rachel. this is just great.
Entwined in such a way that it is impossible to recognize the lines as being Rachel's or yours.Loved Soul N Rachel. May the friendship live long!
first of all I would like to say that I enjoyed reading this poem, beautifully written. second of all the Sun does not have any other work, other than wooing the moon, only natural satellite and the playmate of the earth. Some how Unwritten soul has escaped from the accusation in the last stanza by calling all these three as friends, after singing a dream duet as shown in the Indian Movies ! well done Sunprincess and Unwritten Soul.
Good job Soul! ! ! & Sunprincess! ! ! thanks for this dedication...
A great and amusing collaborative work. You dear soul and dear Sunprincess are thanked for this nobel work. Lines from top to bottom are interesting to read. There is beautiful friendship in nature among sun, moon and earth. Beautifully crafted.