Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Sun Alives By The Moonlight Smile Comments

Rating: 4.1

Crystallized light
Perfecting on distant surfaces
As two lay promises and entwined
Glittering darkness with dusty bright
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2017

A great and amusing collaborative work. You dear soul and dear Sunprincess are thanked for this nobel work. Lines from top to bottom are interesting to read. There is beautiful friendship in nature among sun, moon and earth. Beautifully crafted.

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Frank James Davis 03 April 2013

A charming and enchanting collaboration. Exceptional work!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 05 March 2013

A wonderful collaborative work with Sun Princess- Sun, earth, moon we three / Friend we always be.- Captivating lines !

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Thomas Hsi 05 March 2013

Great poem, great talent. Powerful and eternal. Now bring Sunprincess back from where she has gone.

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Thomas Hsi 05 March 2013

Great poem, great talent. Powerful and eternal. Now bring Sunprincess back from where she has gone.

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Valerie Dohren 02 March 2013

Soul and Rachel, a beautiful poem marked with your special stamp - a great collaborative effort.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 March 2013

This is so rare and beautiful. i remember lots of things by reading this work. Well done soul and Rachel. this is just great.

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Neela Nath Das 02 March 2013

Entwined in such a way that it is impossible to recognize the lines as being Rachel's or yours.Loved Soul N Rachel. May the friendship live long!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 March 2013

first of all I would like to say that I enjoyed reading this poem, beautifully written. second of all the Sun does not have any other work, other than wooing the moon, only natural satellite and the playmate of the earth. Some how Unwritten soul has escaped from the accusation in the last stanza by calling all these three as friends, after singing a dream duet as shown in the Indian Movies ! well done Sunprincess and Unwritten Soul.

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Sun Shine 28 February 2013

what a poem, , , very best. :)

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Shahzia Batool 28 February 2013

Good job Soul! ! ! & Sunprincess! ! ! thanks for this dedication...

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