Friday, September 22, 2006

Sun (A Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The smiling sunrays
Coming from the azure sky
Brighten up my day.
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asma bahrainwala
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Reuben Matthew 06 November 2006

a very happy picture painted here. just loved it. Reuben.

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R H 22 September 2006

I could feel the warmth and brightness as I read this, lovely haiku Asma. Justine

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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 September 2006

sun chases away darkness and pessismism

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Tranquil Ocean 22 September 2006

A perfect haiku. Love..TO

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