Saturday, April 26, 2008

Sun Comments

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Oh sun, you that all morning touch my body in my bed,

With its light through window.
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Marly Santos
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Sameer Ahmed 28 June 2009

Finding a good companion in the absence of the adored one and wanting it to act as a messenger and convey the message of love to the loved one. The light of Sun has been used very eloquently as a gleam of hope in darkened life to light up the melancholic inner vibe.....10/10

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Obinna Eruchie 18 June 2009

It is sweet, keep it up.

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Marly Santos

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