Sunday, January 8, 2012

Sun Comments

Rating: 4.1

As your sun rotates and gives me a revolution,
I twirl and glide around your heat,
every movement,
lost between this void-less space.
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Crimson Love
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Bella Hernandez 19 January 2012

Beautiful imagery that makes ur point very clear... splendid poem Crimson ~Bella

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Dave Walker 18 January 2012

A very beautiful poem. A great write.

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Wahab Abdul 12 January 2012

nice poem..thinking poem...theme is very good ..i like the poem...please read my poems

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Kara Towe 11 January 2012

Great write! So vivid. Thank you for sharing :)

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