Tuesday, July 24, 2012

Sun Comments

Rating: 3.7

When the sun slaps you
in your face
and turns it red
you say;
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Kasia Fedyk
COMMENTS
Sina Farajzadeh 01 August 2012

Wow. Perfet natural poem. I really like it. Specially the idea of slap of sun. I myself used it as a slap of drops of rain. I'd write it in web later. Good job dear friend.

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Randy Hogan 31 July 2012

When the sun raises over a little blue humble planet and frist rays of light kisses your sweet face. GOD will smile for the beauty he has made, when he made you. Lovely write 10sssss RANDY~*~

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you say; thank you... nice one and thanks giving poem....10 you must thank all divine powers, as they unbiasingly favor

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this rubicand encounter.... lit up the dark silence...

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Neela Nath Das 28 July 2012

Novelty of thought.So beautiful expression. The word picture stupendous.In a nut shell---wow!

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Unwritten Soul 28 July 2012

Loved it...you teach us a golden advice here...brighter than the sun

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Valerie Dohren 27 July 2012

Short but very beautiful and meaningful.

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Hamid Negah 25 July 2012

Kasia, you always refresh my mind, thank you.

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Heather Wilson 24 July 2012

Oh that is so beautiful Kasia, short and sweet.

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