When the sun slaps you
in your face
and turns it red
you say;
...
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When the sun raises over a little blue humble planet and frist rays of light kisses your sweet face. GOD will smile for the beauty he has made, when he made you. Lovely write 10sssss RANDY~*~
you say; thank you... nice one and thanks giving poem....10 you must thank all divine powers, as they unbiasingly favor
this rubicand encounter.... lit up the dark silence...
Novelty of thought.So beautiful expression. The word picture stupendous.In a nut shell---wow!
Loved it...you teach us a golden advice here...brighter than the sun
Wow. Perfet natural poem. I really like it. Specially the idea of slap of sun. I myself used it as a slap of drops of rain. I'd write it in web later. Good job dear friend.