Sun Comments

-you are from us so far-very sensitive line -dear sister poet

With light from the sun, nature's beauty can be viewed at sight.

Many thanks for your vote. And I think your poem deseves 10+++

Blazing with beauty. Keep on growing!

so sweet and lovely poem, you are right the sun is so beautiful and important.well done and keep writing

merna, very meaningful poem, i like your style of writing.

a wonderful poem merna.sweet and meaningful.well done..10++++

well done dear.....keep up the good work and the sun will keep shining

Wow................beautiful rhymes..........Indeed without sun there is no fun..........keep writing...................

Your parents are the sun that shine on you, givin you life, to live.

Good write Thank for telling us about the sun

i loved this poem, i love the way you express yourself through poetry, keep on we want more! ! ! KUJI! :)

i took a similar poem at school....the poet also talked about the sun.....but not as wonderful as u.......great one lovely to read......10++

A brilliant work with sun. I love this piece.10+++

wonderful, excellent and rich enough... merna dear, you did it realy a very perfect way... inspiring poem... good idea and written sweeeeet... hey you are advancing and the each new poem is better then the previous..thanks merna for all of you love and concerns and comments...1000 ++++++++++

Scientifically you have enumerated the sun's description, its advantages and disadvantages.10+++ for this,

the truth... and it is said in smooth and simple line, it is a nice poem Merna! ! 10++

Nice poem on sun and on its life saving power...good selective words all through, Merna...'you revolve around your axis' is a nice poetic expression...the 'motion' of sun is relative to earth though...10

A great tribute to Sun The Planet of Light and Life 10++++++