! ...Sun Comments

and the streak of sun will come soon.....its a very beautiful poem indeed, while reading it i float to imaginery world of mine, this poem relates me, i wish the streak comes out soon or it'll be too late....thanks for sharing this wonderful poem and it goes to my fav.10+++++++++++ and ++++++++++A

The personification of the sun, which is masculine, and adress him and pine for him is a theme where the passion has been cleverly poured. a well strctured poem the sun is fortunate provided he knows the longing. i know.

a beautiful concept penned well, lined with fine imagery

The Sun streaks...............silver lining diminishes.............the clock ticking....awaits...........the crying limbs....blazing to the air! What a streaking piece Seema.

This is very good. Different from ur other positive poems. Used good metaphors and similies. I liked it so much.............10

wow........seems....this is one of ur best.........well done

awaiting an enthusing sun to come out of moody clouds...nice imagination here, Seema...10

Your words, your verses so powerful! beautifully expressed! 10++++++

Oh yeah it goes to my fav list

Oh Seema, You just like me I was also awaiting to see that Sun shines on all of us-that one who is so pure of thought and mind- that one who is so sensitive- and wants to hide behind the clouds at the mere sound of harsh word from the thunder. A beautiful write and A++++++++ and 10++++++++++XXXX100 love anju

a lovely poem..well penned.. A 10 Ency Bearis