Monday, March 17, 2008

Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

moving all the time
lovely sun
no matter, feels happy
still moving
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Greenwolfe 1962 04 April 2008

There is no doubt now, that we have a philosopher in our midst now. GW62

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xxxxx xxx 03 April 2008

masallah akhi keep it up inshallah!

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Shiza Khan 28 March 2008

i like the poem.. it contain the hope for everyone to live. :)

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Emancipation Planz 23 March 2008

Refreshingly ra ra ra! ! ! ! I have a baby niece and family in PM... I hope the stars will guide me to visit one day soon.

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Melvina Germain 18 March 2008

A lovely write abdul, you clearly identify the true qualities of the sun. I know that English is not your mother tongue, never-the-less you did a great job, I enjoyed the read Abdul, thankyou.

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Katherine Wiley 17 March 2008

Abdul-Your poem is very nice. I think you can learn to write poetry, if you will pay close attention to it, and make corrections. I enjoyed your poem. kat I am sending you a message, too

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Abdul Razaq

Abdul Razaq

faisalabad, pakistan
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