Friday, November 5, 2010

Summon The Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Summon the dawn and raise me the wind.
Spin me the wheel and dance me the day.
Toss me a ray of sun,
Fetch me a glass of dreams.
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Ilania Cyaalá
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Kevin Carney 25 November 2010

Wow, beautifully written. As I read your poem I felt I was floating on the wind. Its a beautiful write and visually so pleasing. I loved your line: Fetch me a glass of dreams. 10+++

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