Thursday, April 15, 2010

Summit And Gravity Comments

Rating: 3.1

There's a motionless tree
And another one coming forward
A river of trees
Hits my chest
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Octavio Paz
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2019

We like sunlight and sun both. This poem is definitely very interesting and lovely. A nice poem of the day is chosen.10

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Dominic Windram 03 December 2019

This innovative free verse poem abounds with colourful, wild, surrealistic imagery courtesy of Octavio Paz...it's a 10 from me!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2019

River of trees! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Harley White 03 December 2019

Great images... wonderful poem...

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2019

Their wings carry the day Planted in the crest of light Between firmness and vertigo You are Transparent balance. very poetic.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2019

the solar system summit to gravity apex to roots sun to ocean light to water evaporation circling, recycling the life to balance transparently!

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