Sunday, April 26, 2020

Summit Comments

Rating: 4.9

To wish a life without the slant upward
is to wish a dim life
without the excitement of rising
without effort, just jostling
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Anjandev Roy 01 September 2022

If u have time, read my poem.....dingy earth, two travellers..

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Anjandev Roy 01 September 2022

This is an outstanding Work.......thank u, dear Poet.

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Luz Hanaii 01 June 2020

Very inspiring words with such great flow and rhyme thanks for sharing dear friend.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 16 May 2020

If there are no trials and tribulations, life would be dull indeed. We need to be always searching confronting problems to become the best. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Kevin Patrick 12 May 2020

Man is driving climb to reach above his place to reach summit, but nothing one reaches is as important as finding love.

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 10 May 2020

growth, progress... a great idea... very nicely crafted

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Somali Mukherjee 07 May 2020

Yes, life without twists and turns is meaningless. However, nature's works are just effortless. Love is the summit and the epiphany That makes everything full of symphony. - Great work of art with profound philosophical tones. Enjoyed every word in it. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem with us............10+

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Rajnish Manga 07 May 2020

Outstanding poem with a philosophy of life. One needs to aim higher to attain what others may not even aspire. Lofty achievements bring real delight. Thanks a lot for sharing an amazing poem.

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Nikho Schin Valle 06 May 2020

such a great and well done poem.

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Lawerence Mize 05 May 2020

well written.Thank you for sharing.

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Anjandev Roy 05 May 2020

This is simply brilliant......thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2020

A great poem, God creates nature. Sublime eloquent muse indeed. Kudos.

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Martin Greyford 02 May 2020

To climb is to experience the ascent itself-in all its moments of revelations-the heart-break, the fatigue, the peak within, thanks for sharing with us epic

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Meaningful and inspiring write.Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 April 2020

o wish a life without the slant upward is to wish a dim life............Lovely starting lines of a thoughtful poem.

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Kishore Kumar Das 30 April 2020

Critical analysis of your lovely poem reveals that love is the ultimate summit...nicely penned..

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Craig Mize 30 April 2020

I read this poem 3 times now and every time I got a different meaning. A beautifully written poem my friend

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Randhir Kaur 30 April 2020

Yes, Love conquers all. There is this summit. Very nice ending with a beautiful meaning.

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You see something of your own soul in the plants, animals and birds that no museums could hold what nature effortlessl creates. Many paths lead to the top but there's only one summit-love, is the epiphany. Truely great thoughts. The imageries of summit, alpinist, peak etc are excellent....10

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Soran M. H 29 April 2020

very fine philosophical poem, interesting to read it many times, have multiple meaning, keep writing and stay blessed

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