To wish a life without the slant upward
is to wish a dim life
without the excitement of rising
without effort, just jostling
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Very inspiring words with such great flow and rhyme thanks for sharing dear friend.
If there are no trials and tribulations, life would be dull indeed. We need to be always searching confronting problems to become the best. Mohabeer Beeharry
Man is driving climb to reach above his place to reach summit, but nothing one reaches is as important as finding love.
Yes, life without twists and turns is meaningless. However, nature's works are just effortless. Love is the summit and the epiphany That makes everything full of symphony. - Great work of art with profound philosophical tones. Enjoyed every word in it. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem with us............10+
Outstanding poem with a philosophy of life. One needs to aim higher to attain what others may not even aspire. Lofty achievements bring real delight. Thanks a lot for sharing an amazing poem.
A great poem, God creates nature. Sublime eloquent muse indeed. Kudos.
To climb is to experience the ascent itself-in all its moments of revelations-the heart-break, the fatigue, the peak within, thanks for sharing with us epic
o wish a life without the slant upward is to wish a dim life............Lovely starting lines of a thoughtful poem.
Critical analysis of your lovely poem reveals that love is the ultimate summit...nicely penned..
I read this poem 3 times now and every time I got a different meaning. A beautifully written poem my friend
Yes, Love conquers all. There is this summit. Very nice ending with a beautiful meaning.
You see something of your own soul in the plants, animals and birds that no museums could hold what nature effortlessl creates. Many paths lead to the top but there's only one summit-love, is the epiphany. Truely great thoughts. The imageries of summit, alpinist, peak etc are excellent....10
very fine philosophical poem, interesting to read it many times, have multiple meaning, keep writing and stay blessed
If u have time, read my poem.....dingy earth, two travellers..