Saturday, July 18, 2020

Summery Retreat: (Sonnet, July,2009) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have chosen a place where I can rest awhile
Away from troublemakers and mad, howling crowds.
On this summery retreat, I'll try out new styles
Of poetry. And I'll embrace new sights and sounds.
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Shaun Cronick 18 July 2020

Excellent sonnet! Beautifully layered and composed with thought and feeling. And like a good sonnet each lines cascades into the next.10++ Dominic and thoroughly well deserved too. If only The Great Bard were here to view and enjoy it too. Many thanks and I wish you well.

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