Saturday, April 16, 2016

Summertime Treat Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw the sweetest little girl
Why, it was just the other day
With a pink little Popsicle
While the girl was out at play.
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Marilyn Lott
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 21 April 2016

Nice introduction to the little one, I loved the start. I saw the sweetest little girl Why, it was just the other day With a pink little Popsicle While the girl was out at play. Children are but the reflections of the parental love and care. I'll bet her parents are proud People I would love to meet This day that I saw a little girl With a lovely springtime treat! Nice poem. Short, Precise. Words well choosen. It deserves a perfect 10. Subhas

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Rajnish Manga 16 April 2016

And yes, thanks a lot for the picture accompanying the your lyrical poem.

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Rajnish Manga 16 April 2016

I just can't tell you how I felt on reading this beautiful poem. The lovely atmosphere created by you remains etched on the reader's mind. Thanks, Marilyn. I quote: I'll bet her parents are proud People I would love to meet

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Marilyn Lott 17 April 2016

Thank you so much for your kind comment. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem.

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Marilyn Lott 17 April 2016

Thank you so much for you kind comment on my poem. I appreciate it so much.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 April 2016

Dreams! It was just another day in summer. Thanks for sharing.

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Marilyn Lott 17 April 2016

I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you!

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