Sunday, November 4, 2012

Summertime, O Summertime Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beautiful the sunshine's glow
On a gentle summer`s day
Bringing joy to every heart
With all sadness chased away
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Valerie Dohren
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Shaun Cronick 05 April 2020

Beautiful and thank you Valerie. What more is there to say

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Shahzia Batool 28 November 2012

Wordsworthian Scribe! any poem about season or nature has an indulgent pleasure of its own... and you have done justice with your images...

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Asif Andalib 18 November 2012

Lovely write. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry

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Nelly Wilder 17 November 2012

Reminds Me of my summer very beautiful :)

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Josh Dinkin 15 November 2012

A part of the seasonal cycle we can all enjoy. Another gem for the treasure trove.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 15 November 2012

Such a gentle and soothing piece.

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That`s the marvel of your U.K as summer sets in Valerie... The poets from Asia have proved themselves to be careless about that! For us summer is very hot and it is the time our rivers go slender, lakes shallow and our birds and animals too hunt for drinking water... Your thoughts are applicatively superb and we feel proud of your landscape in Valerie. But we in India just often cry, oh! summer, oh! summer and no lines flow forth....

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Dee Corpolongo 12 November 2012

Val, once again, you have brought such a delightful and colorful feeling with your words and descriptions so perfectly chosen. I love nature and esp. summertime, and you have definitely captured the wonderful feeling of it here. Thank you for sharing.

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Sandra Feldman 12 November 2012

How the Poet paints with word: Feeling, images, sounds, it's magic. Loved your Smmer's Delight poem, SF

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Hans Vr 10 November 2012

The love of nature in a wonderful season, so briightly and excellently expressed in very melodious verses. A big 10

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Stevie Taite 09 November 2012

hhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Walterrean Salley 08 November 2012

I'm so anticipating summer. It's one of my favorite season. Your poem has a soothing, peacefull, dreamy affect-leaving one warm and refreshed. Beautiful.

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Yash Shinde 07 November 2012

great work, very rhythmic and musical great joyful and enthusiastic write :)

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Vipins Puthooran 06 November 2012

to see the bloom of spring is an ecstasy! !

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Valsa George 06 November 2012

Birds and blooms of the pleasant summer time continue to be greatest attraction for many including me and you too, I assume. As ever a splendid celebration of the season by Valerie!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 06 November 2012

A very nice ditty looking forward to the pleasant summer time.I enjoyed the fabulous poem.Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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John Brown 05 November 2012

Takes me back to my youth, roaming the countryside (such as it was where I was brought up) and bird-watching with my pals. Lovely poem Val.

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Neela Nath Das 04 November 2012

A vivid presentation of soothing nature. So calm, and quiet! Love your diction ever. This time also no exception.

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Dave Walker 04 November 2012

So very beautiful you can almost hear music as you read it. A really fantastic poem.

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Prasanna Kumari 04 November 2012

you make the summertime more beautiful with your words.....

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