Monday, April 6, 2009

Summertime Comments

Rating: 5.0

Islands of cloud moves away,
Out comes saffron heavens,
Golden ball rises o’er edge way,
From nowhere there’s squadron of ravens
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Noel Horlanda
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Keep rainy days away, Dry season adhere, . Drizzle froze by the roadway, Summertime is here! ... summer has got it's own charm... very well versed in the poem. tks for sharing

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 April 2009

Summertime delight portrayed beautifully. Wonderful imagery very well worded.....10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Catrina Heart 06 April 2009

A very fabulous poetic pictorial of Summertime, great image you have painted here...fine end rhymes.....Thanks! 10++++

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Noel Horlanda

Noel Horlanda

Bohol, Philippines
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