Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Summertime Comments

Rating: 5.0

Summer is here
You are in California
I'm over here
It's driving me crazy
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Christina Phan
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Wesley Mincin 25 July 2009

I can see that Free Verse is your preferred style since every poem that I have read (so far) is Free Verse. Know what? I think Free Verse is one of the easiest, if not the easiest, style to funnel passion. Now, I'll admit, and don't take this the wrong way, that you do have work to do as far as how to write (grammer) but the poem itself has a deep depth to it. I can imagine that you were in a lot of pain while writing this and each word was like a tear drop. Don't know if it was close to that but I'm assuming that it's something like that. To be honest, I think this is your best poem so far. Good job, Christina.10/10

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