Wednesday, August 19, 2020

Summertide Comments

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arising one morning I shook my weary head, rays of golden sunshine revolved around my bed, I opened up my windows to allow some air into my room was greeted by the fragrance of my garden flowers perfumes, in looking to my garden wall red roses i could see being pollinated thoroughly by swarms of busy bumble bees, in the heaven above that were coloured blue the swifts and swallows rapidly flew, after breakfast i left my country home outward to the coast i decided to roam.
on arrival the tides were out with a mass of screaming people running all about, 'ice cream! 'ice cream'! a vendor did yell'its a beautiful day and I have plenty to sell! The crowds thronged around the vendor like bees around honey, A little child shrieked, 'I lost all my money! As the hue and cry passed away, money been found everyone was smiling no face had a frown
walking along the shifting sands, I witnessed kites flying with multitudes of folk on the beach were lying.other bodies were eating cheese and partaking of wine they didn't take notice when i asked them the time,
into the madness of this magnificent day saneness I did seek, Phew! the smell of seaweed oh it did reek! Ladies I observed wore straw hats while menfolk and children were digging holes like rats,
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kaya Brodio 02 March 2024

everything about summer is here great poet

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Gill Hipkin 30 September 2020

Here we go again on another wonderful journey through the Summer season! Wow!

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Tanya De Burgh 30 September 2020

asked to check out Mikes latest offers and have not been disappointed. Another great journey thru the sunshine

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Kevi Keego 05 September 2020

A very good description of summer! It takes one on a journey with anything you could want in that season! ! Brilliant.

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Tanya De Burgh 01 September 2020

Another hidden gem! ! love reading Mikes down to earth poetry! !

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