Friday, August 9, 2013

Summers Love Comments

Rating: 4.4

It was in the month of May
On a hot summer day
When i spoke my feelings to her in gay
By thinking of, might she pay
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Fatima Obaid
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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2017

Beautiful love poem nicely brought forth from the heart in good rhyme scheme. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Fatima.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2016

It was in the month of May! Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 February 2016

You have show me rays I don’t wanna say no And let our love seed to be sow In the garden of love With the sprinkling of dew Summer days are few So let me of you...... let our seeds of love grow in the garden of love. really amazing poem. thank you very much. tony

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Musawir Raakh 19 October 2015

QUITE A GOOD SHOT, VERY WELL WRITTEN DEAR

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 28 October 2014

With the sprinkling of dew Summer days are few So let me of you A very beautiful heartfelt poem which communicates its message in simple manner. Well done Keep it up

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Marvin Brato 06 October 2013

Romantic poem, many can relate!

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Abhishek Mishra 27 September 2013

Beautiful poem with a charm..throughly enjoyed it,10/10 from me: -)

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Kaleb Brown 31 August 2013

you are really good, i really like this poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2013

Maybe she will regard my feeling..NICE POEM LOVE IN SUMMER...10

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Heather Wilkins 30 August 2013

a nice poem on summers love. in the garden of love with the sprinkling dew summer days are few keep writing dear you will only get better

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