Summers Gentletouch. [nature] Comments

Thank you Jazib for your wonderful comments

A refined poetic imagination, Alan B. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

The sunlight flickered is definitely very bright and motivational light. Shimmering light has lit her smile. Nature has become graceful. Flowers have bloomed and beauty is surpassed. This poem has rich imagery and brilliantly penned...10

My favourite line, As trees reached for the sky breaking leaf - you can see the trees growing. Nice poem.

Enjoyed your poem that touches nature so gently. Correct too second stanza.