Summers Day Stroll Comments
She wore a simple summer dress
Her arms and legs were brown and bare
What stole my heart I must confess,
the red/gold beauty of her hair.
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A splendid poem Ivor! ! You are the MAN! Great read! ! *10*! ! ! Best regards! Friend Thad
Oh, I do like this one, Ivor. Maybe because I can relate to it so well. Even though we now may be seen as 'old and harmless' we still remember when we were 'young and dangerous.' And of course, we always appreciate beauty whether it's a young lady or a beautiful poem, such as this one. Excellent. Thank you. Richard
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9/18/2025 9:18:44 AM # 1.0.0
Ivor, rhyming 'waterfall' with 'aureole, is an absolute gem. This is a wonderful flowing piece. The music is catchy and the use of langague is fantastic. Leaving me with little more to say except thank you!