Sunday, July 2, 2017

Summers Blood Comments

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July is drunk with heat
And the afternoon's sun is stoned
Dilating a bulging red,
Curing the skies glaucoma Soon everything's a haze As the molting ruby pours A serenade of drowsiness Slips between my bones
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Kevin Patrick
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 July 2017

Feeling forever young, yeah summers magic. Amazing diction word choice here, great poem in brevity. 'Moulting ruby' wow admire that phrasing. Strong terms blood ink, very impressive. Kudos. So Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u too will review my latest poem titled, 'For all cheese chums'

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