Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Summer Verve Comments

Rating: 4.5

Windy is the day and cordial are clouds
Drifting through the sky in the month of May
The sun hides behind the dark shroud

Blazingly hot been the noon but as
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Yasmin Khan
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Farah Ilyas 25 May 2013

Nice portrayal of a nature, Freshen the heavens awash all dust and heat Soon the sun gold-drenched smiles and winks Gentle like a kiss the air blows nippy and sweet.. enjoyed while reading...thanks to share

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Valsa George 20 May 2013

The sunny days occasionally bathed in May showers and Nature rejuvenated with a new verve and life is beautifully described! !

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Captain Cur 18 May 2013

An elaborate display gently and rhythmically describing a simple scene of nature's profundity on our lives.

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Wahab Abdul 17 May 2013

lovely nature poem with nice flow...and good diction, i enjoyed it....

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Sallam Yassin 16 May 2013

after I read this beauty art i felt that summer is time to believe in love and that always a chance to replenish the feeling of youngster in my heart thanks to gave me that believe and feeling of youth

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Shahzia Batool 16 May 2013

Poetry or photography? it's graphic! ! ! thank u jasmeen! ! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 May 2013

In fact it is summer vigour that make happy almost all inspite of hardship of summer a nice picturisation and one more thing I like the words selection nice canvasing

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Gajanan Mishra 15 May 2013

inner desire replenished by mother nature, good write. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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