Sunday, February 22, 2015

Summer Time Comments

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See the sun, smell the air
Fun is coming, spring is near.
All the children laugh and play,
Pick a flower, smell the rain.
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Karin Elizabeth Martin
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Roseann Shawiak 22 February 2015

Great poem written in a sing song way, with wonderful melody! Fantastic imagery bringing me right into your poem and seeing what you see in writing. Rhythms is impeccable, love this poem. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Karin Elizabeth Martin

Karin Elizabeth Martin

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