Thursday, July 19, 2018

Summer Syntax (After Billy Collins) Comments

Rating: 5.0

If sentences are journeys,
Then poems are expeditions
Into the unknown reaches
Of the jungles, the deserts,
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Mahtab Bangalee 20 July 2018

truly wonderful poem penned excellent...excellent And Yes I, too, can lead the willing Into the wilderness of untamed syntax. excellent

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Ruta Mohapatra 20 July 2018

One of the best I have read so far on poetry! I especially like the fourth stanza. Your language is refreshingly pleasant.

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Robert Murray Smith 19 July 2018

A truly epic write.- - +10

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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