Thursday, May 1, 2014

Summer Swelter~ Comments

Rating: 4.9

Drenched in this humidity...we suffer
Feeling claustrophobic in this Summering swelter
With bare feet we walk the yellow blades of grass
Looking for our green dressed shelter- - -
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Theodora Onken 02 May 2014

Yash, Thank you so much!

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Yash Shinde 02 May 2014

The summer heat is scorching Indian peninsula too, ...But yes, this rhyme of yours has a soothing effect, a short and sweet rhyme, that flows swiftly and smoothly like water! ..............kudos!

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