Sunday, April 12, 2009

Summer Surfaces Comments

Rating: 5.0

The over-blue is full of noise, and bottomless, summer sinks its
Humid teeth into the sky, boiling tons of barely breathable air,
Dynamic flotillas of white clouds graze the illusory crown of sun,
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Laurence E. Bourke
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Fay Slimm 12 April 2009

Another winner Laurence - - from the 'high-noon blue' to the summer sinking it's 'humid teeth' - - all excellent metaphor and usage of word..... you are heading for a good poetic future - - keep writing..... a 10 again from Fay....

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Fiona Davidson 12 April 2009

Beautiful Sunday morning thoughts and excellent write...10++

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Laurence E. Bourke

Laurence E. Bourke

Dublin, Ireland
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