Saturday, July 15, 2017

Summer Supremacy Comments

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Summer supremacy,
autumnal aspirations
winter warmth
and spring senses....
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Captain Cur 10 September 2017

My thoughts, original inhabitants of this land, described as the girdle of emerald reminds me of our paradise lost that we all strive to find. The new inhabitants of this land, regardless of their wealth or fancy belongings can never own or take away its beauty from those deceased spirits whom reside beneath but still walk upon its precious ground. Not sure if this was your meaning, it is a beautiful, almost meditative and thought provoking piece.

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Seema Chowdhury 29 August 2017

Lovely and very meaningful. I read it twice to under the essence of this poem. Thanks a lot for sharing Take care

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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