Monday, August 27, 2018

Summer Sunset (Haiku) Comments

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Nosheen Irfan
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Valsa George 02 September 2018

Lovely haiku accompanied by a lovely image!

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2018

Awesome haiku with apt picture. Nothing less than 10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2018

A beautiful haiku on summer sunset is being nicely executed. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided.10

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Nosheen Irfan 02 September 2018

Thank you sir for valuable comments.

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 August 2018

Hi Nosheen, Very beautiful haiku. The setting summer sun itself is a wonderful experience, as if seen in a kaleidoscope. The beauty of the sunset is embellished by the image of the birds flying homeward, their wings “gleeful”... The glee comes from their expectations of reaching home for the night, simply. But, this image is yet more colourful; the brightness and tinges added by the evening sun to the feathers. Onlu Nosh can imagine this and express in so brief words.100+++

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Nosheen Irfan 02 September 2018

Thank you so much for such generous praise sir.

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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2018

Loved the alliteration in the first line!

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Nosheen Irfan 27 August 2018

Thank you so much Kelly

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2018

...A wonderful Haiku! Thanks for sharing....10

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Nosheen Irfan 27 August 2018

Much obliged sir Dillip

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Nosheen Irfan

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