Monday, June 22, 2020

Summer Stroll Comments

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Splendid, sizzling summer
At the overcrowded beach
Loitering, looking and lurking
But she was hustling and bustling
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Richard Antwi
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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 June 2020

Amazing poem for the ones who are still single. For the ones who are already occupied, or have a steady girlfriend, this poem is not the right one. Your Poet's Notes says this poem goes about people meet their love ones in a strange and bizarre ways, but the problem is that (I cite the words here) " But I stared at her Asked me ‘why'? Oh, just looking and lurking for love Ended in Loveland" Strong suggestion makes the reader think this is about the poet himself.

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