The day passes and cool shades
Move on stealthily, creeps in dusk
Air sways, darkness cascades
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A fine example of Cadence...a painting written, or a poem painted! ! ! you know it's beautiful! ! !
vivid word picture in shades of HD color and grays too an apt seasonal poem written in a less commonly used aba cdc rhyme scheme classical and endearing liked it :)
shroud dark and deep, darkness cascades nice imagery it sound like someone whispers nice
colorful warm breeze flowing from words with kind deep sense of desire that got her right time beneath the sweet shades of summer nice written and pleasure to read