Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Summer Solace Comments

Rating: 4.5

The day passes and cool shades
Move on stealthily, creeps in dusk
Air sways, darkness cascades
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Yasmin Khan
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Sallam Yassin 25 April 2013

colorful warm breeze flowing from words with kind deep sense of desire that got her right time beneath the sweet shades of summer nice written and pleasure to read

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Shahzia Batool 25 April 2013

A fine example of Cadence...a painting written, or a poem painted! ! ! you know it's beautiful! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 24 April 2013

Lovely poem, very descriptive and atmospheric.

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Saadat Tahir 24 April 2013

vivid word picture in shades of HD color and grays too an apt seasonal poem written in a less commonly used aba cdc rhyme scheme classical and endearing liked it :)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 April 2013

shroud dark and deep, darkness cascades nice imagery it sound like someone whispers nice

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Gajanan Mishra 24 April 2013

Fine description of evening. thanks.

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