Friday, May 22, 2009

Summer's Song. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Awakened, we will,
Along the rill of summer's edge,
Find the glory of sound.
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Fay Slimm
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An enchanting, magical celebration of nature's beauty with images flashing in and out of all its glory. 10 Karin Anderson

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this is fantastical... fay you are so in touch with nature..

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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

this is a wonderful, nice refreshment indeed..i felt it to the core..nice ..thanks for the entertainment 10++

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Bob Gibson 31 May 2009

invited in to your woodland scene, dappled lighted by rippling stream quiet of foot and ears strained, the forest creatures yet untamed bird song, mayflies, a croaking frog, a thousand miles from city smog at one with natures wondrous treasures, thank you Lord for simple pleasures Thank you Fay, lovely poem, regards Bob

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James Timothy Jarrett 31 May 2009

Wonderfully written rhythm that flows through this

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Tom Balch 30 May 2009

lovely images of summer coming Fay, a lovely piece, Tom 10+

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C. P. Sharma 28 May 2009

Finely chosen diction with jingling music in the background filigreed images from the Nature's best in summer. CP

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Juneil Sechico 27 May 2009

very fresh summer! this is winner Fay! I love the tempo, imagery and the way it was written! 10 from me!

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i only wish we had a summer like you all...our summer is scorching

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Lynda Robson 22 May 2009

As always, wonderful imagery, I hope we can have a nice summer this year, lovely words Fay, 10 Lynda xx

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Sue Sie 22 May 2009

Oh yes...you describe so well I can hear it all Fay...lovely..10++ Sue

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Catrina Heart 22 May 2009

Great summer song made........fine diction and rhymes............10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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