Awakened, we will,
Along the rill of summer's edge,
Find the glory of sound.
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this is fantastical... fay you are so in touch with nature..
this is a wonderful, nice refreshment indeed..i felt it to the core..nice ..thanks for the entertainment 10++
invited in to your woodland scene, dappled lighted by rippling stream quiet of foot and ears strained, the forest creatures yet untamed bird song, mayflies, a croaking frog, a thousand miles from city smog at one with natures wondrous treasures, thank you Lord for simple pleasures Thank you Fay, lovely poem, regards Bob
Finely chosen diction with jingling music in the background filigreed images from the Nature's best in summer. CP
very fresh summer! this is winner Fay! I love the tempo, imagery and the way it was written! 10 from me!
i only wish we had a summer like you all...our summer is scorching
As always, wonderful imagery, I hope we can have a nice summer this year, lovely words Fay, 10 Lynda xx
Oh yes...you describe so well I can hear it all Fay...lovely..10++ Sue
Great summer song made........fine diction and rhymes............10
An enchanting, magical celebration of nature's beauty with images flashing in and out of all its glory. 10 Karin Anderson