Thursday, June 18, 2009

' ' ' ' ' Summer’s Song Of Itself(For Onelia) Comments

Rating: 2.7

Bee
crash lands on pond

paddles around
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Dónall Dempsey
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Onelia Avelar 30 June 2009

Summer song, I read You for the sixth time and cannot find the right words. I feel like the bee circling around your poem like around a blossoming flower :) . I just enjoy :) before to land and leave a comment :)

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Kerry O'Connor 21 June 2009

Superb. This is my favourite. 'Summer's song of itself...' You should patent that line!

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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