Saturday, March 31, 2018

Summer's End Comments

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The summer was full of bustling crowds
Of Ferris Wheels and recreation park rides
Of Handball games and swimming races
Of Barbecues where we lingered over the fire
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Asher Proschansky
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Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2018

But the best time was the week after the labor day races When my friends and I had the beach to ourselves And the beach still looked trampled on And we played our own games and explored aqueduct trails.. we confided in eachother.. life and sociability. contacts, being human. love. relationships...... all that is so important came in this poem.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Asher Proschansky 01 April 2018

Thank you for your kind comment. I read your poem and liked it. I see that you have submitted very many poems to Poem Hunter. In time I'd like to read them. Thanks again for you insight. They say when a poem is submitted it stands by itself apart from the author and belongs to the interpretation of readers. I hope to be a good audience to your poems.

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