Heavy summer rains
Prompted five tall boys to jump
In the mud puddle
Threw wet earth at each other
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Childhood memories are roused in torrents.....! After the blistering summer days, when rain pours down from the sky, it is a matter of great excitement for everyone, especially for children who enjoy at the prospect of playing in the puddles! A lovely poem!
Playing along with the muse of the rain! ! Heavy downpour. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The poem is sure to evoke nostalgic feelings among the readers' mind. 'Even the cats want to join' - this last line enhances the appeal of the poem so much!
Wow! ! ! That is what we have done in our childhood days in our village pond. Beautiful short poem. Loved it. Thanks for sharing such a gem.10++
That brings back memories! ! Children and mud! A match made in childhood heaven- -perhaps the last heaven people find on earth! I like the feeling this poem emits to the reader. 10++++
A well crafted terrific tanka. Simply wonderful.....10+++💗💗💗
dancing summer rains soaked the path with joyful boys…….. And to enjoy the delightful moment nature wanna to join d….. Superb enjoyable writings……fantastic 10++
Awesome Limerick. Indeed rains are such aluring but pleasurable. It's just explicit. Well written
Allurement for jumping in the mud puddle created by heavy summer rains is an universal phenomenon. While young boys and adolescents can give justice to the call adults can not due to obvious reasons. Great poem taking down the memory lane. Thanks for sharing.10++
A delightful little poem! Today was a rainy day so it fits the atmosphere wonderfully! Thank you for sharing!