Wednesday, June 18, 2014

Summer Rain - A Haiku Comments

Rating: 3.8

Fine shimmering rain
dancing on skin, alighting
on leaves as glitter
...
Read full text

Susy Evelyne
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 07 March 2019

A nice haiku on Summer rain. 'alighting on leaves as glitter' - a nice description.

0 0 Reply
Sina Farajzadeh 07 July 2014

Hi. Haiku is a nice japanese poetry type. Thanks

0 0 Reply
Heather Wilkins 02 July 2014

a nicely written haiku dancing on the skin

0 0 Reply
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 June 2014

Exquisite haiku on rain n shine. Nice to read u again susy. U hav forgoten me.

0 0 Reply
Colleen Courtney 18 June 2014

A lovely visual this little haiku creates! Beautifully written!

0 0 Reply
Susy Evelyne

Susy Evelyne

Bristol
Close
Error Success