Saturday, February 3, 2018

Summer Rain Comments

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She tried to be happy but it was all in vain.
So she went outside and kissed the rain.
She let the raindrops fall on her tongue.
Then her heart began singing a happy song.
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Lamar Cole
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Practicing Poetess 04 February 2018

In reality, she would've gotten a bunch of pollutants on her tongue- - But hey, this is poetry, right? A very sweet poem!

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Rini Shibu 03 February 2018

Nice poem about summer rain

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Sandra Feldman 03 February 2018

Nice idea, very original. Summer Happiness in the rain. Certainly projects a refreshing, cool feeling. Well done!

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