Like a summer rain she fell
That hot September hour
And caught unawares he was drenched,
He lost all power
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Great poem Tan, I enjoyed reading it, and particularly liked the reference to the woman being like summer rain, best wishes Lynda
Very nice Tan, I like the feel of this poem, definitely a (10) from me. Melvina
Powerful expression! 17-19 you say? Wow.... Let me read the other numbered entries.: _)
a very well written poem of the heart with great flow and imagery well done my friend.
excellent work! I loved it from start to finish...pen on! Always, Amberlee
I can see and feel this. Very descriptive. I enjoyed reading this. I agree with Charles' assessment.It's beautiful. L
a beautiful and powerful narrative of love the image created sticks in the reader's mind total immersion in the wonder of water a fine poem
A beautiful and intriguing work. The imagery is just absolutely captivating. Bravo!