Thursday, February 2, 2006

Summer Rain Comments

Rating: 4.8

Like a summer rain she fell
That hot September hour
And caught unawares he was drenched,
He lost all power
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Tan Pratonix
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Seamus O Brian 13 December 2016

A beautiful and intriguing work. The imagery is just absolutely captivating. Bravo!

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Lynda Robson 07 February 2008

Great poem Tan, I enjoyed reading it, and particularly liked the reference to the woman being like summer rain, best wishes Lynda

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2008

Very nice Tan, I like the feel of this poem, definitely a (10) from me. Melvina

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Fred Rik Kesner 18 April 2006

Powerful expression! 17-19 you say? Wow.... Let me read the other numbered entries.: _)

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Cantrell Dicky 10 February 2006

Very nice in praise of love and women

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Cecil Hickman 09 February 2006

a very well written poem of the heart with great flow and imagery well done my friend.

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Amberlee Carter 09 February 2006

excellent work! I loved it from start to finish...pen on! Always, Amberlee

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 02 February 2006

I can see and feel this. Very descriptive. I enjoyed reading this. I agree with Charles' assessment.It's beautiful. L

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Charles Chaim Wax 02 February 2006

a beautiful and powerful narrative of love the image created sticks in the reader's mind total immersion in the wonder of water a fine poem

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