Summer Rain Comments

As I look on, the rain stops And its rattle suddenly stilled Like a beautiful concert Abruptly closed, leaving waves of joy! ......thrilling expression. Beautiful metaphorical poem shared amazingly. Thanks for presenting here.10

Chanced upon it while reading your other poem. So glad to have read this lovely Nature poem. Such beautiful expressions to indulge all my senses while rain drops dance behind my eyes. Thanks for sharing.

Breeding florescent light and rumbling sound...or fluorescent? As adjectives the difference between fluorescent and florescent is that fluorescent is of or relating to fluorescence while florescent is flowering or budding. ha ha. undlees it is different in India? could i hear more about this, please? : Feel the thrill of the first firm grip of my love bri (: i happened upon this while trying to stay on Summer In My Brain page.

Its a wonderful wonderful poem, so very picturesque. Thanks for the share, Valsa

This is summer rain. It comes and goes Like teenage romance Licking rising flames of heat Rainbow description of summer rains, colorful and lovely.

the whole atmoshphere has been brought out here clearly and beautifuly!

A wonderful poem with a lovely detailing of the summer rain.... loved it.

Summer rains are big relief from schorching sun rays but sadly not all places in India experience summer rains, it is only southern India, eastern, northeastern and some coastal areas which experience summer rains, the rest will have to wait till monsoon. I do agree with you, summer rains have got soothing effect.

.......summer rain gives relief from burning heat, and is like a boon for many in rural India, your poem is well enriched with emotions of such people and great imagery as well, lovely write.

perhaps little johnny wont like this one, , coz he wants to play, , , : P wonderful poem, , , i have always admired your diction that you use on yur poems, , , it; s simply amazing like always, , ,

I love this! Beautiful work as always. I love how you compare the rain: first as a teenage love that comes and goes(which is brilliant by the way!) and second like a beautiful concert that sends ripples through its crowd! I enjoyed every line of it ^_^ ~Nika

a beautiful poem with an excellent imagery.....truly mesmerizing

Though the summer rains are a little deceptive, you have thrown light on its beautiful impact on the landscape. The imagery and diction are wedded in true union and the poem has an alluring charm to remind oneself of listening to the tale of a sprouting life against all odds.

u reminded me tennyson....sunshine all the way happiness everyday... drops of rain to cool my parched poetic spirit....thank u

u reminded me tennyson....sunshine all the way happiness everyday... drops of rain to cool my parched poetic spirit....thank u

Oh! what a imagery with lines so deep..........Valsa........rain me really mesmerized I am speechless...really great

It sinks fast into the mud Promising new sprouts of green Sieving deeper into my mind Reviving faded dreams! The sky that peered through veils of grey Beamed and brightened once again With all its ache washed away In the purging tears of crystal drops! The above two stanzas forms a brilliant contrast and a peculiar harmony. In the first stanza the rain is pouring dreams whereas in the second one the sky is expelling her grief. A brilliant write from your illuminating pen.

This is a very beautiful write about the rain. I just love to see and hear it when and wherever it falls. Your descriptions and observations makes for a worthy write. Just beautiful.

After the roar of the wind and the concert of rain, the sky looks as innocent as ever. Beautiful description of summer rain. Thank you.

a beautiful concert.... I will read this poem......again and again I love it...