(summer Poems) Some Haiku And Tankas) Sunbathing And Eating Al Fresco Comments

These poems bring back memories of past summers. Really awesome write!

These little gems twinkle with the essence of Summer - just a soupcon of sauce, gives them the Janice Windle sparkle! Delicious S ;)

Janice, these three poems are particularly clever with there double meanings. With Sunbathing I loved 'we taste salt and relish'. With Summertime Blues the repetition worked so well with blue, In Thyme the last line did it for me! These are so well crafted. Well Done! 10 Karin Anderson

enjoyed reading and really reflects passion for write .......